My double page spread has undergone a couple of little tweaks. The first amendment was a grammar error in the sub-heading sentence below the main graphic on the right side page. I added a full stop in the sentence after the word "work", as the sentence contained a comer which didn't suit the sentence.
I also moved the left and right text column in the story a touch closer together to the middle column as the right column was too close to the background edge and the left column was too close to the left page image therefore moving them allowed the story to look more practical while leaving enough space around the middle column to see the synapses.
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